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    Add 8-24 words to the story. No more than 24, no less than 8. No back-to-back posts.

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    It was another late night for Philipe and his janitorial crew. The summer heat at the zoo was stifling and tonight was no exception.
    Last edited by donteatpoop; 03-22-2011, 04:30 PM.
    The organ is grinding but the monkey won't dance.

  • #2
    Originally posted by donteatpoop View Post
    Add 8-24 words to the story. No more than 20, no less than 10.
    So is it 8-24 word or 10-20 words? Make up your mind!


    It was another late night for Philipe and his janitorial crew. The summer heat at the zoo was stifling and tonight was no exception.
    He couldn't believe it was still nearly 90 and the sun was going to come up in a few hours.
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    • #3
      Originally posted by Dragavan View Post
      So is it 8-24 word or 10-20 words? Make up your mind!
      That was clearly a misquote on your part and not a mistake on mine. Look at my post again. I don't know where you're getting that 10-20 word thing from. I certainly didn't edit it out of my original post. I would never do such a thing. Ever. Especially not just now.

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      It was another late night for Philipe and his janitorial crew. The summer heat at the zoo was stifling and tonight was no exception. He couldn't believe it was still nearly 90 and the sun was going to come up in a few hours. But elephant shit doesn't clean itself and he had bills that needed paid.

      The new guy came jogging up to him, eyes wide with
      Last edited by donteatpoop; 03-24-2011, 03:23 PM.
      The organ is grinding but the monkey won't dance.

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      • #4
        It was another late night for Philipe and his janitorial crew. The summer heat at the zoo was stifling and tonight was no exception. He couldn't believe it was still nearly 90 and the sun was going to come up in a few hours. But elephant shit doesn't clean itself and he had bills that needed paid.

        The new guy came jogging up to him, eyes wide with lust. Philipe knew Miguel was a convicted sexual predator, but now he realized how wrong the zoo staff had been in hiring him. Now

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        • #5
          It was another late night for Philipe and his janitorial crew. The summer heat at the zoo was stifling and tonight was no exception. He couldn't believe it was still nearly 90 and the sun was going to come up in a few hours. But elephant shit doesn't clean itself and he had bills that needed paid.

          The new guy came jogging up to him, eyes wide with lust. Philipe knew Miguel was a convicted sexual predator, but now he realized how wrong the zoo staff had been in hiring him. Now the only thing Philipe wanted less than to be raped in the ass was to be raped in the ass in front of the
          The organ is grinding but the monkey won't dance.

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          • #6
            It was another late night for Philipe and his janitorial crew. The summer heat at the zoo was stifling and tonight was no exception. He couldn't believe it was still nearly 90 and the sun was going to come up in a few hours. But elephant shit doesn't clean itself and he had bills that needed paid.

            The new guy came jogging up to him, eyes wide with lust. Philipe knew Miguel was a convicted sexual predator, but now he realized how wrong the zoo staff had been in hiring him. Now the only thing Philipe wanted less than to be raped in the ass was to be raped in the ass in front of the elephant cages. He knew how intelligent elephants were and they could be permanently traumatized from witnessing an anal invasion. Philipe had

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            • #7
              It was another late night for Philipe and his janitorial crew. The summer heat at the zoo was stifling and tonight was no exception. He couldn't believe it was still nearly 90 and the sun was going to come up in a few hours. But elephant shit doesn't clean itself and he had bills that needed paid.

              The new guy came jogging up to him, eyes wide with lust. Philipe knew Miguel was a convicted sexual predator, but now he realized how wrong the zoo staff had been in hiring him. Now the only thing Philipe wanted less than to be raped in the ass was to be raped in the ass in front of the elephant cages. He knew how intelligent elephants were and they could be permanently traumatized from witnessing an anal invasion. Philipe had a switch blade in his pocket, just in case.

              "Hey, Philipe," said Miguel, "Hot night, huh?"

              "Uh....ya," came Philipe's awkward reply.

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              • #8
                It was another late night for Philipe and his janitorial crew. The summer heat at the zoo was stifling and tonight was no exception. He couldn't believe it was still nearly 90 and the sun was going to come up in a few hours. But elephant shit doesn't clean itself and he had bills that needed paid.

                The new guy came jogging up to him, eyes wide with lust. Philipe knew Miguel was a convicted sexual predator, but now he realized how wrong the zoo staff had been in hiring him. Now the only thing Philipe wanted less than to be raped in the ass was to be raped in the ass in front of the elephant cages. He knew how intelligent elephants were and they could be permanently traumatized from witnessing an anal invasion. Philipe had a switch blade in his pocket, just in case.

                "Hey, Philipe," said Miguel, "Hot night, huh?"

                "Uh....ya," came Philipe's awkward reply.

                They stood in silence as Philippe shifted uncomfortably under Miguel's gaze. The ex-con eyed him up and down, licking at his lips. He moved
                The organ is grinding but the monkey won't dance.

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                • #9
                  It was another late night for Philipe and his janitorial crew. The summer heat at the zoo was stifling and tonight was no exception. He couldn't believe it was still nearly 90 and the sun was going to come up in a few hours. But elephant shit doesn't clean itself and he had bills that needed paid.

                  The new guy came jogging up to him, eyes wide with lust. Philipe knew Miguel was a convicted sexual predator, but now he realized how wrong the zoo staff had been in hiring him. Now the only thing Philipe wanted less than to be raped in the ass was to be raped in the ass in front of the elephant cages. He knew how intelligent elephants were and they could be permanently traumatized from witnessing an anal invasion. Philipe had a switch blade in his pocket, just in case.

                  "Hey, Philipe," said Miguel, "Hot night, huh?"

                  "Uh....ya," came Philipe's awkward reply.

                  They stood in silence as Philippe shifted uncomfortably under Miguel's gaze. The ex-con eyed him up and down, licking at his lips. He moved swiftly, pinning Philipe against the bars of the enclosure. Miguel pulls a small blade from his shirt pocket, brandishing it with glee against Philipes

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                  • #10
                    They stood in silence as Philippe shifted uncomfortably under Miguel's gaze. The ex-con eyed him up and down, licking at his lips. He moved swiftly, pinning Philipe against the bars of the enclosure. Miguel pulls a small blade from his shirt pocket, brandishing it with glee against Philipes spine. He whispered "take off your pants" into Philippe's ear as he undid his own. "You're so beautiful."

                    Miguel began to cry.

                    Just then
                    The organ is grinding but the monkey won't dance.

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                    • #11
                      They stood in silence as Philippe shifted uncomfortably under Miguel's gaze. The ex-con eyed him up and down, licking at his lips. He moved swiftly, pinning Philipe against the bars of the enclosure. Miguel pulls a small blade from his shirt pocket, brandishing it with glee against Philipes spine. He whispered "take off your pants" into Philippe's ear as he undid his own. "You're so beautiful."

                      Miguel began to cry.

                      Just then the long, leathery trunk of one of the elephants emerged between the bars of the cage and wrapped itself tighty around Miguels neck

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                      • #12
                        This story needs to be finished. Pulitzer prize stuff here. I've been on the edge of my seat for months waiting to see what happens to Miguel!

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                        • #13
                          They stood in silence as Philippe shifted uncomfortably under Miguel's gaze. The ex-con eyed him up and down, licking at his lips. He moved swiftly, pinning Philipe against the bars of the enclosure. Miguel pulls a small blade from his shirt pocket, brandishing it with glee against Philipes spine. He whispered "take off your pants" into Philippe's ear as he undid his own. "You're so beautiful."

                          Miguel began to cry.

                          Just then the long, leathery trunk of one of the elephants emerged between the bars of the cage and wrapped itself tighty around Miguels neck. Miguel, shocked, yet simply writhing in anticipation, arched his spine to provide space for the elephant

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