I've been off and on on this, but it's also been the ONLY thing I've been writing.... I've had to do some "research" with the actual Galaga game lately....
What do you think of the mood of the story so far? How is it? Do you find it difficult to read through?
I know that I need to describe the game play, and have; but I don't want to bore the reader with video game details. How am I doing on that?
I also need to work in an additional plot line or two. One plot will be easy, the next laundromat visit there will be an attractive female and thus a 'romantic' sub-plot, though it will be a minor subplot.
I don't want to write any scenes that take place outside of the laundromat, however; so any additional info will likely be the character in thought, or some flashbacks... Not really sure... Any ideas?
I appreciate any feedback, even negative feedback that I will likely get defensive about.
High Score
Thanks in advance to any of you who take the time to check this out.
What do you think of the mood of the story so far? How is it? Do you find it difficult to read through?
I know that I need to describe the game play, and have; but I don't want to bore the reader with video game details. How am I doing on that?
I also need to work in an additional plot line or two. One plot will be easy, the next laundromat visit there will be an attractive female and thus a 'romantic' sub-plot, though it will be a minor subplot.
I don't want to write any scenes that take place outside of the laundromat, however; so any additional info will likely be the character in thought, or some flashbacks... Not really sure... Any ideas?
I appreciate any feedback, even negative feedback that I will likely get defensive about.
High Score
Thanks in advance to any of you who take the time to check this out.
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